13/11/17
Your Berlin photos are difficult to follow in terms of your intentions and reflections- they would be better organised as slideshows in themes. This would allow you to annotate and not just present a huge number of images without anything then gives us an insight into why you think it is good or not etc. How does Berlin compare to New York. I would like to see you compare a few images from both cities. This could then help you identify what and how to photograph London.
Your Berlin photos are difficult to follow in terms of your intentions and reflections- they would be better organised as slideshows in themes. This would allow you to annotate and not just present a huge number of images without anything then gives us an insight into why you think it is good or not etc. How does Berlin compare to New York. I would like to see you compare a few images from both cities. This could then help you identify what and how to photograph London.
31/10/17
Lack of annotation makes it difficult to follow your development. Make sure that you refer to your brief in your annotation, explain edits (include screen grabs) and identify what you learnt from the previous sets.
http://habeebatphotography.weebly.com/practical-work.html
upload unedited pictures to show the difference in edits
Lack of annotation makes it difficult to follow your development. Make sure that you refer to your brief in your annotation, explain edits (include screen grabs) and identify what you learnt from the previous sets.
http://habeebatphotography.weebly.com/practical-work.html
upload unedited pictures to show the difference in edits